Tuesday, 16 April 2013

TOEFL writing practice : successful life


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, it goes without saying that money is the most powerful means of being successful. Having plenty of money means he can buy whatever he desire for and he can go wherever he hope for. Money gives many advantages up to attaining to their goals. However, not are only the rich successful. The meaning of success is countless. According to value in person or region where he lives or atmosphere of the time he belongs, it can be differently defined. What the success is rely on the person who says this.

To begin with, the person who achieves their dream is successful regardless of the amount of money. Although the job which he has is trivial, if he is fully satisfied with what he is doing, he can say “I do succeed” In the other hand, no matter how much he has money or how good well-paying job he get, if he had given up what he wanted to be because of money and he just live letting his life goes without purpose, he would say “I didn't succeed” Needless to say, the person who is doing the work of what he has dreamed of is a successful one.

On the top of that, the person who dedicates his life to the valuable things such as helping the needy or involving in religion is also successful. People are willing to give up the chance to make much money for the values they have pursued though it asks them much of sacrificing. They dare to sacrifice themselves for the values. Such people may regard themselves the unsuccessful. It likely sounds irony, but the people who pour everything in him out on the meaningful purpose are truly successful.

I have introduced only two different cases of successful person but there are more cases of life of being successful having nothing to do with money. As an extreme example, if one poor person without job and family and even house regards himself as the successful, he is successful. No one can judge the others with saving balance or one standard which the majority has. The statement of which only people who earn a lot of money are successful is a very narrow definition because it is just one case of a lot of successful lives. 

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** Successlike beautyis in the eye of the beholder for somemoney is a measure of successbut that is a very narrow definition. I do not think all people who earn a lot of money are successful. Successin my opinionis measured by how we live our livesnot by what we obtain.

Oftento be successful means to realize a goal that one has set for himself or herself. If that goal were to be a good studenta high grade point average would be the measure of success. If the goal is to be able to run eight miles in under an hoursuccess would be measured by being able to perform that feat. As we are all individuals with individual goals and aspirationsthere are as many definitions of success as there are people with goals. Howevermoney does maintain a very special place in our society. In the United Satesunder a capitalist economic systemwe are encouraged to set goals that obtain wealth. Thuswhen someone sees another person driving the streets of Beverly Hills behind the wheel of a Rolls Roycehe or she might assume that the person is successful. That would only be truehoweverif that person had set as a goal to own a Rolls Royce. He may be a failure in other areas of his lifeand may even be drowning in debtbut because he is able to display wealthmany people think he is successful.

In conclusionappearances can sometimes be deceiving when it comes to money. It is important to remember that success is always measured on an individual basis. If you feel that you are successful because you have realized a goalthen you are. If you feel like a failurehoweverno amount of money will be able to make you feel like you are a successful person. Certainlymoney is only one of a number of ways to determine success.



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