아.. 시간도 많이 걸리고, 맘에 안든다. 글자수는 좀 많이 오버됐다. 440자?
Q. Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year.
others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year.
which viewpoint do you agree with？Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
When it comes to the vacation, the issue should be considered in a variety positions of people such as teacher, parents as well as students. Unless we consider the interest of each group, it can cause a serious conflict among them. I think one long vacation satisfies with as many members of our community as it can in terms of the efficiency in time for family plan and the benefits from extra acitivies. Therefore, being given one long vacation benefits to students.
To begin with, through a long vacation, students have a chance to experience extra activities beside regular course of school. For example, if students have three months vacation, it is enough time to go abroad in order to experience the other culture or language. Also, If they are interested in music instrumentals, they can concentrate on mastering the music instrument during the time. When I was in high school, in Korea, I had only four weeks vacation twice a year. And even during vacation, most of time, I had to come to school due to the vacation class.I used to think that If I had three months of full vacation, I would have spent my time experiencing other activities. Since I got into univetsity, I could have full time of vacation. At that time, I spent most of the time traveling and voluntiring, going around all the world, America, China, Mongolia etc. This experiences and memories actually influenced on establishing my character and left in itself as my precious asset and unique knowledge in my mind.
Secondly, It is much easier to make a family plan than having short-term vacations throughout the year. Nowadays, the increasing number of household in which both parents work have been a social issue. During the vacation, there need public supports for taking care of our children. Whenever vacation comes, finding a center or an alternative school is bothersome for parents as well as children felt tiresome I saw one good example of the United America. They have long vacation, so they often send their children to a summer camp during their vacation It seems be good both children and parents. Children can experience other culture and meet a variety of friends off-site classroom and parents also have a real vacation for summer.
Secondly, It is much easier to make a family plan than having short-term vacations throughout the year. Nowadays, the increasing number of household in which both parents work have been a social issue. During the vacation, there need public supports for taking care of our children. Whenever vacation comes, finding a center or an alternative school is bothersome for parents as well as children felt tiresome I saw one good example of the United America. They have long vacation, so they often send their children to a summer camp during their vacation It seems be good both children and parents. Children can experience other culture and meet a variety of friends off-site classroom and parents also have a real vacation for summer.
To achive something in our mind, enough time to be able to focus on should be given. Moreover, family issues need to be considered in abroad view. Whether how much our children spend their time in a proper manner counts on the right decision we makes. We need to creat a comfortable environment around them and other social members. One long vacation is the better environment where we have expected.
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